What do you say about this poem? Where you place it from 0-9?

From 0-9, I rank this a 9. I personally cannot relate to this, but it did remind me of some of Jim Morrison work. “No one gets out alive” – Jim Morrison (The Doors). Your poem is creative, I got your point. I see your sensitivity in the fact that you are trying to control other people actions by using scare tactics. The poem is very good. I also think it’s a stepping stone for other work to follow if you wanted to.